the essay...

[QuirkyCarla]

Here it is. Yeah, it sucks.

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[McGiver]

its good.

first off i would take your name off the bottom of the page, since this is the internet.

second, have you taken the time to really lkisten to your teacher?
remember, survival in college boils down to giving them what they want with a touch of your own flavor.  people love to hear themselves speak, and love to think they are right.

[QuirkyCarla]

second, have you taken the time to really lkisten to your teacher?

which one? 

[McGiver]

each teacher.  give em what they want.

[QuirkyCarla]

yeah, i do that 

[lilia]

I like it.  I want you to be my teacher now.

[McGiver]

i really like the idea of choices.  it will motivate the children more.  i for one, resent being told what to do.

[Callaway]

I like your paper.  I would incorporate the two sentences after the paragraph about your fourth grade teacher into that same paragraph, because you are still talking about the same teacher.  For me, there is a blank fourth page.  Is there something I missed?  Do you want to add anything at all?

[Leto729]

It looks good to Me too.

[QuirkyCarla]

I like it.  I want you to be my teacher now.

lol, thanks

[QuirkyCarla]

I like your paper.  I would incorporate the two sentences after the paragraph about your fourth grade teacher into that same paragraph, because you are still talking about the same teacher.

Thanks, and will do...

For me, there is a blank fourth page.  Is there something I missed?  Do you want to add anything at all?

You didn't miss anything. I'm not sure why that's there.

[QuirkyCarla]

It looks good to Me too.

thanks kevv. that means a lot in the end.

[Leto729]

Your welcome.

[McGiver]

 

[McGiver]