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Start here => What's your crime? Basic Discussion => Topic started by: Leto729 on May 08, 2009, 09:21:53 AM
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I have been kind of busy lately.
I am apart of South Dakota Advocates for Change.
It is a Leadership program for People First.
These are the first rough drafts.
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They both look good, but I like the first one the best because it's simpler, Kevv.
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I like these because they are shapes.
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I like the person on the lightning bolt.
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I like the first one best too. Well done!
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I like the person on the lightning bolt.
Yeah. That makes him look like THE FLASH or something. Cool.
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Here a couple more logos.
The motto of South Dakota Advocates for Change is: Mobilize, Organize, Act.
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I think the one at the start would be amazing if "People moving forward" became "Moving people forward". Though I am not sure if you are allowed to change the slogans.
All the best with it anyway, hope you continue to succeed :)
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Here a couple more logos.
The motto of South Dakota Advocates for Change is: Mobilize, Organize, Act.
MOA ...?
Isn't that urban slang for "more?"
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I think the one at the start would be amazing if "People moving forward" became "Moving people forward". Though I am not sure if you are allowed to change the slogans.
All the best with it anyway, hope you continue to succeed :)
That sounds good also. :plus:
That is a good ideal. :indeed:
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Here a couple more logos.
The motto of South Dakota Advocates for Change is: Mobilize, Organize, Act.
MOA ...?
Isn't that urban slang for "more?"
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I have it for Chairman Mao Myself :lol:
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Shit.
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Shit.
just like you..
lets see you make something better
nice job Kev, looks good :clap:
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Am I not allowed to say it's shit? It's called OPINION, and my opinion is that I think it's shit. If you don't like my opinion, then shove it up your arse.
But anyway, continue whinging on how your life sucks and stalking aussie autistic bints. You're crap at everything else. :hahaha:
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"Moving people forward" is the logo the town I was born in used on their signs for awhile. I always think simple is good. On another note I thought this was going to be about Lego's :hahaha:
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Here are a few more.
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Nice work, ...all of them.
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Still looks like a cheap job done on mspaint.
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Here are a few more.
I like number 3. The mobilise, change, act bits look a little disjointed. Maybe having small bullets next to each one might look better.
Still looks like a cheap job done on mspaint.
Your being a bit harsh. There is little fundamentally wrong with them, just need an anti-aliasing filter applying to them.
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Your being a bit harsh.
Brutal honesty. :zoinks:
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I think that the images could be stepped up a bit by adding some outlining or bordering to the letters (same hues, different values) and maybe adding some small degree of "inner glow" or "inner shadow" as they call it in Photoshop (not that familiar with your PSP, sorry), which gives the lettering a slight illusion of dimension, then a consistent drop shadow to everything to help things stand off the background a bit. Don't overdo it and make sure that the "drop shadow" is consistently done on each item you want to raise or at least make the shadows progress evenly from either top down or bottom up if you want to have the images seem to approach the reader from below or above. Angling the lettering (as in using a vanishing point) also helps the illusion of falling or uplifting letters.
It wouldn't hurt to have the background show a slight gradation or vignetting from one direction to another or from the center to the outside, for instance.
I think all Schleed is saying is that they look unfinished, mostly.
As far as the content, I think it's workable, but be careful of using more than one or two font styles in the same image and make sure that a color change in lettering is for a specific reason and that it actually works when a print is viewed in daylight, rather than just onscreen.
The trick is make a logo memorable, but instantly identifiable. That's not easy. To make it look "finished" has mostly to do with familiarity of the software you are using.
Remember all those great commercials you've seen that made you laugh, but you have no idea what product they were advertising? Those ads, while they were ingeniously conceived, did not work well as ads.
Don't be discouraged, Kevv. Just play with all the toys your program offers until you are satisfied.
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The Leadership Board has chosen these two.
A vote coming soon on these two:
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Your being a bit harsh.
Brutal honesty. :zoinks:
They just wanted some simple logos only.
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Your being a bit harsh.
Brutal honesty. :zoinks:
They just wanted some simple logos only.
It would be faggotry to be offended by that scot. I can tell the dude is a perfectionist from his room to his photography. Of course he's going to be overly critical. Nothing to be upset about.
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Your being a bit harsh.
Brutal honesty. :zoinks:
They just wanted some simple logos only.
It would be faggotry to be offended by that scot. I can tell the dude is a perfectionist from his room to his photography. Of course he's going to be overly critical. Nothing to be upset about.
I was not upset.
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Your being a bit harsh.
Brutal honesty. :zoinks:
They just wanted some simple logos only.
It would be faggotry to be offended by that scot. I can tell the dude is a perfectionist from his room to his photography. Of course he's going to be overly critical. Nothing to be upset about.
I'm Irish. :zoinks:
Fuck sake, why is there typical WP mentality when it comes to giving criticism? :violin:
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The first one looks to me like a bikini bottom. So I would go with the second one.
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Your being a bit harsh.
Brutal honesty. :zoinks:
They just wanted some simple logos only.
It would be faggotry to be offended by that scot. I can tell the dude is a perfectionist from his room to his photography. Of course he's going to be overly critical. Nothing to be upset about.
I'm Irish. :zoinks:
Fuck sake, why is there typical WP mentality when it comes to giving criticism? :violin:
That sure does explain a lot then. ;)
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The first one looks to me like a bikini bottom. So I would go with the second one.
I like the first one Myself. ;)
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Your being a bit harsh.
Brutal honesty. :zoinks:
They just wanted some simple logos only.
It would be faggotry to be offended by that scot. I can tell the dude is a perfectionist from his room to his photography. Of course he's going to be overly critical. Nothing to be upset about.
I'm Irish. :zoinks:
Fuck sake, why is there typical WP mentality when it comes to giving criticism? :violin:
Irish huh? My bad man. :orly:
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Simple to organizations with out big budgets usually mean cheap and easy to produce the monochrome ones are usually ahead in that department and get voted in