I like the attitude shown by having your nose turned past the centerline of the camera and your eyes drawn back to the camera in a kind of challenging way. Nice pic!
... and you are certanly a looker.
If I was going to be critical, next time, try bringing down your chin down a small bit and elongating your facial features, instead of compressing them and allowing us a view of the inside of your nostrils from having your forehead tilted back a bit. Making your eyes a closer feature to the camera will tend to enlarge them, minimising your cheeks and enhancing your already intense desirability. This is me really STRETCHING to find any "fault" with the eye of a long time portrait photographer. Do not take it for more than its value as a way to increase the artistic statement you can make when using a facial image as a way of defining oneself.
I would also lower the angle of the lighting, move it father away from you and make sure that more light flows into your eyes and it will become more balanced with the light that hits your cheeks. I would not mind darkening the areas around your eyes, except that you just went a bit too far in places that could have been left lighter, outlining the natural beauty of your shape.
In case you have missed my point, I think you are extremely beautiful and I am having trouble NOT imagining how I would photograph you, if I had the chance. I can also see a very dark pic, with just your outline over-exposed, but the rest of your form shrouded n the mystery of graduating shadow depth, but that would take quite a while to describe.
For now, I will just stop and say that YOU are DAMN HAWT!
