horrible at socializing? Just expand on everything you talk about, like an English essay.? Drawing is easy, just draw what you see, it make take a while but I can do it.
"That same day, I thought she was going to suggest me becoming a writer...." That does not sound wrong to you??
My teacher was going to suggest I become a writer, but instead she suggested I become a teacher.
I would suggest you leave out what she said, because it sounds redundant.? You already said the same thing before it. I understand how much you liked that teacher, and thus saw the need to repeat yourself for emphasis. It sounds redundant, and you should find another way to make emphasis without sounding redundant.
Does that sound better?