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Offline Lucifer

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Haikus 'R' Us
« on: August 13, 2006, 03:19:12 PM »
here's one odeon started earlier:

Glassless orge with squealing tongues.

so, with a tad of judicious tweaking...

glassless orge   squealing
tongues   rutabaga and whale
drown gay fluorescence.
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2006, 03:40:13 PM »
 :o
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2006, 03:59:53 PM »
I've stopped smoking now
So raiding the pain pills stashed
diverts from cigs well. :D
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2006, 04:10:26 PM »
happy pills like clouds
enveloped in blurred softness
then violently sick
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2006, 04:47:44 PM »
would you like a mop?
that doesn't sound like the pills
liked you very much. :P
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #5 on: August 14, 2006, 12:41:09 AM »
mop curls round, making
wave shapes through putrescent pools
pie-full and acrid.
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #6 on: August 14, 2006, 04:20:40 AM »
what you on about?
because I've done no puking
got guts of steel, me.  :-\
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #7 on: August 14, 2006, 05:25:01 AM »
poetic thread (for
he who pays no attention)
will have no meaning

:P
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #8 on: August 14, 2006, 05:28:25 AM »
In that case, I will
join in wittering in ways
totally random. :P
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #9 on: August 14, 2006, 06:07:18 AM »
fluorescent are the ways
of random irrelevance
you will fancy men
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #10 on: August 14, 2006, 02:35:03 PM »
I'm impressed; I thought
this thread would be more dirty
and sick.  (Give it time?)
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #11 on: August 14, 2006, 02:53:35 PM »
such preconceptions
are saddening to the heart
even though so true

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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #12 on: September 06, 2006, 02:11:40 PM »
I don't understand
what's so great about haikus.
Most of them just suck.
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #13 on: September 06, 2006, 02:49:19 PM »
Quote from: Beowulf on September 06, 2006, 02:11:40 PM
I don't understand
what's so great about haikus.
Most of them just suck.

I had to 'yay' you for that, what is this world coming too  :P
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Re: Haikus 'R' Us
« Reply #14 on: September 06, 2006, 02:53:31 PM »
What are haikus?
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